You are a strong writer and a great artist! You would get all five stars but, you creeped me out and this is catagorized as an original comedy. There is no way I am giving you five stars: on the premises that I wanted to laugh and now I'm scared.

:(

This only gets 3 stars for the story. As an animation as a whole it was very lacking. The narration was not standardised, but in virtue of that I can see where you tried to place emphasis.

But the story was great and you emulated the nature of the characters perfectly. I was ready to click it off but it was somehow, very, compelling.

This is a list of what you need-
Proficient Animators
Voice Acting
A secondary writer to help you with your work

If you go to the Flash Forum, and Collabs section I am sure you will find these things.

With the right people you may actually be able to create your own Dragon-Ball Saga.

Good Luck.

That was fucking creative

And in turn so fucking brilliant.

Well done! I would give this a million likes if I could! Keep up the great work!

It was very pleasing to play

Very enthusiastic. Very vivid. Very. Crash Bandicoot-ish?

Well done. I really enjoyed it!

This was weirdly inticing

The writing was nice and the music sort of made it... Enjoyable?

The ad block breaks for me

My friend says this is very fun so I'll take your word for it.

Running Firefox, latest flash.

"Play game" gets stuck half way through on the advertisement panel. Please try and fix.

Griffon

Viva Piniata

Definitely for spade squishing fun.

Suffering is said to be a form of creation

You done gone proved them right. Go put this on some sort of record deal.

I think you deserve it!

It reminds me of Braid

A fair lot. Not sure if it inspired you or anything;

If so, great tribute!

If not, great work!