You are a strong writer and a great artist! You would get all five stars but, you creeped me out and this is catagorized as an original comedy. There is no way I am giving you five stars: on the premises that I wanted to laugh and now I'm scared.
But you see, I now get to laugh about you being scared. See how this works?
This only gets 3 stars for the story. As an animation as a whole it was very lacking. The narration was not standardised, but in virtue of that I can see where you tried to place emphasis.
But the story was great and you emulated the nature of the characters perfectly. I was ready to click it off but it was somehow, very, compelling.
This is a list of what you need-
A secondary writer to help you with your work
If you go to the Flash Forum, and Collabs section I am sure you will find these things.
With the right people you may actually be able to create your own Dragon-Ball Saga.
That was fucking creative
And in turn so fucking brilliant.
Well done! I would give this a million likes if I could! Keep up the great work!
It was very pleasing to play
Very enthusiastic. Very vivid. Very. Crash Bandicoot-ish?
Well done. I really enjoyed it!
This was weirdly inticing
The writing was nice and the music sort of made it... Enjoyable?
Thanks for playing the whole game, the review, the favourite and winning four of the medals! There are other medals too, but none of the medals are approved.
The ad block breaks for me
My friend says this is very fun so I'll take your word for it.
Running Firefox, latest flash.
"Play game" gets stuck half way through on the advertisement panel. Please try and fix.
Definitely for spade squishing fun.
I like this a lot!
Is this the sort of thing your band plays? Electronica/Metal in particular seems really 'in' at the moment so you might have a good shot!
Suffering is said to be a form of creation
You done gone proved them right. Go put this on some sort of record deal.
I think you deserve it!
Oh my god
Please sell me this as a stuffed animal.
It is a stuffed animal, yes :)
You get a 5...
You earned it.
I would like to buy this.
I'm only typing this review to make a note of this fantastic painting.
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